Hey Alice. I enjoyed the 2nd poem over the 1st. I like happy stuff a little better than the deeper stuff. But both were good.
The kick to this thread is picking 4 words out of thin air and
then see what evolves. It's quit interesting to see what
develops within someone's brain. And Ed3's pictures develop
some cool and varying poems. Sometimes I've chosen words that
seem hard and wrote rhymes myself to see if it could be done.
Gims suggested this game. And I've had a ball with it. Some of
my buddies have too! Glad you joined the rhyme on a dime club.