Hi Alice, welcome to our poetry group!

Both of your poems are excellent.

The way we ‘play’ here, is a poet writes a poem using 4 suggested words and in return the writer suggests 4 new words for the next topic. We have used words or photographs. Some interesting works have evolved from the same words. It’s really fun. We aren’t any big writers, we just enjoy fooling around with words. If you scroll up a bit, you will see a photograph of a man and a dog. Would you like to write a poem about that scene? Would love to hear what you say. smile
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