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#41976 - 07/13/05 03:14 AM
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Hey Robin, my buddy! Chick, you know what, I will write something about the experience and send it 2 you & Robin:)I think a man with a truck just rung my doorbell 2 see if I wanted him 2 get the tree! I was in the middle of a thought, LOL! I will stop playing my game of, "Spades" & at least start on it. YOU Boomer gals keep me busy and out of trouble, shhhhhhhhh!!! Thanks.
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#41977 - 07/13/05 03:44 AM
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Chick, Robin, & Smile. This is just a 1st draft, I usually don't post them til I revise, but I wanted 2 let Chick know that I wrote a new piece, had not wrote one since I got back from Minnesota!
The Storms That Come Are Way
Today, like all days, I have been blessed. To awake to another day of life…hearing the birds sing. I have once again…been spared…to pray for others. Life…is hard…friends ease the burdens…the trials. We are here today…gone tomorrow. Complain, sure…we are human…imperfect, even spoiled.
All the money in the world…can’t buy life. Work to enjoy life…don’t let it control you. Spend time with family and friends…have no regrets. Give loved ones flowers…while they are alive Not to put on their graves. Continue to pray for others…not just when things are bad.
All of us basically want the same things… Family, friends, good health…to be loved. There is no room for jealousy…covetousness. We can help change this world…that is out of control, By first…changing ourselves. It can be done…in spite of.
© 7-12-05 Eve Hall
Dedicated 2 Chick, Robin & Smile. Enjoy! The last line was the hardest:)
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#41978 - 07/13/05 03:49 AM
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see, I already see a mistake, OUR instead of ARE, lol!!!
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#41981 - 07/12/05 10:21 PM
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Thanks, Dotsie. I do my best work under pressure, LOL! Chick, thanks 4 suggesting I do this. The tree has since been removed. Another storm is on the way. I am looking out the window now! Smile, I have just finished the piece for the contest. It is entitled, "Our Youth Today." Even if I don't win, I have the sastifaction of creating a piece that I truly value. Let me know if you would like me to send it to you. Robin, I might send it to you 2 proofread b4 I send it off,thanks in advance, your new bud:)
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#41983 - 07/13/05 01:29 PM
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Smile it is on the way! Pleaseee give me any feedback 2 make this piece the best it can be. A trip 2 Italy is at stake. Thanks Robin for doing the proofreading for me. Wish I could take you to Italy with me, lol! Is this being positive or what????
They have been showing us all the destruction here all week. The flooding has caused a lot of animal deaths and homes have been flooded with everything being lost. A man had a tree hit his home. He died. I can still see remnants of my tree that fell but most of it has been removed. More rain is on the way!
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