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#41976 - 07/13/05 03:14 AM Re: Poetry Contest
Cagedbird Offline
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Registered: 12/10/04
Posts: 106
Loc: usa
Hey Robin, my buddy! Chick, you know what, I will write something about the experience and send it 2 you & Robin:)I think a man with a truck just rung my doorbell 2 see if I wanted him 2 get the tree! I was in the middle of a thought, LOL!
I will stop playing my game of, "Spades" & at least start on it. YOU Boomer gals keep me busy and out of trouble, shhhhhhhhh!!! Thanks.

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#41977 - 07/13/05 03:44 AM Re: Poetry Contest
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Loc: usa
Chick, Robin, & Smile. This is just a 1st draft, I usually don't post them til I revise, but I wanted 2 let Chick know that I wrote a new piece, had not wrote one since I got back from Minnesota!

The Storms That Come Are Way

Today, like all days, I have been blessed.
To awake to another day of life…hearing the birds sing.
I have once again…been spared…to pray for others.
Life…is hard…friends ease the burdens…the trials.
We are here today…gone tomorrow.
Complain, sure…we are human…imperfect, even spoiled.


All the money in the world…can’t buy life.
Work to enjoy life…don’t let it control you.
Spend time with family and friends…have no regrets.
Give loved ones flowers…while they are alive
Not to put on their graves.
Continue to pray for others…not just when things are bad.

All of us basically want the same things…
Family, friends, good health…to be loved.
There is no room for jealousy…covetousness.
We can help change this world…that is out of control,
By first…changing ourselves.
It can be done…in spite of.

© 7-12-05 Eve Hall

Dedicated 2 Chick, Robin & Smile. Enjoy!
The last line was the hardest:)

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#41978 - 07/13/05 03:49 AM Re: Poetry Contest
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Registered: 12/10/04
Posts: 106
Loc: usa
see, I already see a mistake, OUR instead of ARE, lol!!!

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#41979 - 07/12/05 04:19 PM Re: Poetry Contest
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Registered: 09/03/04
Posts: 2538
Loc: North Carolina
That is beautiful. Thank you so much Caged!

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#41980 - 07/12/05 06:25 PM Re: Poetry Contest
Dotsie Offline
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Registered: 07/09/08
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Caged, I looked at the time of your posts. You really cranked out a lovely poem in no time. I believe we all do want the same things and you hit the topics on the head. It's beautiful. Thanks for sharing.

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#41981 - 07/12/05 10:21 PM Re: Poetry Contest
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Registered: 12/10/04
Posts: 106
Loc: usa
Thanks, Dotsie. I do my best work under pressure, LOL! Chick, thanks 4 suggesting I do this.
The tree has since been removed. Another storm is on the way. I am looking out the window now!
Smile, I have just finished the piece for the contest. It is entitled, "Our Youth Today."
Even if I don't win, I have the sastifaction of creating a piece that I truly value.
Let me know if you would like me to send it to you. Robin, I might send it to you 2 proofread b4 I send it off,thanks in advance, your new bud:)

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#41982 - 07/12/05 11:06 PM Re: Poetry Contest
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Registered: 11/08/03
Posts: 3512
Loc: outer space
I would be delighted to see it cagedbird. It sounds interesting.
smile

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#41983 - 07/13/05 01:29 PM Re: Poetry Contest
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Registered: 12/10/04
Posts: 106
Loc: usa
Smile it is on the way! Pleaseee give me any feedback 2 make this piece the best it can be.
A trip 2 Italy is at stake.
Thanks Robin for doing the proofreading for me.
Wish I could take you to Italy with me, lol!
Is this being positive or what????

They have been showing us all the destruction here all week. The flooding has caused a lot of animal deaths and homes have been flooded with everything being lost. A man had a tree hit his home. He died. I can still see remnants of my tree that fell but most of it has been removed.
More rain is on the way!

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#41984 - 07/13/05 02:19 PM Re: Poetry Contest
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Registered: 09/03/04
Posts: 2538
Loc: North Carolina
"More rain is on the way!"

Oh caged,
I hope you have a good umbrella and a boat!
Please be safe!

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#41985 - 07/13/05 04:09 PM Re: Poetry Contest
chickadee Offline
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Registered: 09/26/04
Posts: 3910
Loc: Alabama
Oh Caged, you have added to my day. I feel honoured that you wrote your poem and humbled that you dedicated to me and others. It is beautiful. You have to submit it somewhere and we'll follow it's journey.
I am glad you are keeping safe with the weather as it is.

Speaking of Journeys...Italy, you wish you could...I am a very tiny framed person and I can lose weight in a hurry. I'm short too. A regular size suitcase with breathing holes works for me. No, no, I have money to spend when I get there and I promise, I won't get in the way. Is this being positve or what....

OK, I understand, Italy is probably too hot this time of year anyway...

chick

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