Chatty Lady: Will do...

Vicki: The story is chicklit with a dash of mystery/adventure thrown in. There are other characters, and therein lies the problem. Although redoing in first person seems to add more "punch," it is very difficult to add in the other characters POVs and at least two of other characters are very central to the storyline. At least, LOL, I kept a copy of the third person re-editing I have already done in case the first person editing did not work...so all is not lost in either case.

I like the first person POV but do not like all the 'I, I, Is' that go along with it.