Hi Eveline,

Oh, I definitely wouldn't want a lot of expletives. After all, my mother has to read it! I just can't have some tough, tatooed guy saying stuff like "Gee whiz, that stinks!" But I'm reviewing the MS now to see what words I can omit without losing the realism and crisp dialogue.

Thanks for your input :-) Sigrid

[ March 29, 2005, 03:30 AM: Message edited by: Sigrid Macdonald ]