Good luck with the contest Storm....I only noticed a few extra or missing words in some of the lines....like:

"Why did Mommy tell me to out in the rain?" (missing the word GO??)

"Mommy sat all day with watching soaps with her gin" (remove word "with" after day?)

"That's funny cause I don't know how drive" (missing word "to" before the word "drive"?)

"Some lady came to took me away" (did you mean to say "took" or should it be "take"?)

Anyway, like I said - GOOD LUCK!!!! [Big Grin] [Big Grin]