p.s. On the editing thing. If you can afford to, hire an editor to do the work for you...then TRUST this person to do a thorough job and also teach yourself that this is no longer your sole responsibility.

If you can't afforad to hire one, then ask your friends or family members if there is someone they know who might swap out time or some other kind of effort for editing services.

I'm sorry for the short answers, but I am on a laptop while my REAL grown up computer is in the hospital, forgive...