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#162830 - 10/16/08 01:09 AM
Re: Authenticity of Voice
[Re: meredithbead]
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Registered: 01/21/07
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Loc: British Columbia, Canada
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I'm such a lazy bum...I've done no creative writing for over last decade. I don't count articles I've written related to my profession and have had published in some newsletters and journals.
I look at some of the poems I wrote as a teenager..a few were published in national magazine for teens. I look back on this.."wow", did I write that? And those poems I like best, still do evoke some similar visual images. of course, I didn't write poetry on my inner angst. The poetry was on the external environment and natural surroundings. Hmmmm, seems similiar to why I like painting landscapes but not people.
I was never a short story writer.
Your poetry that you wrote so young :), should be a reflection at that point in time. It is valuable as is. Better, to take similar topic but write now in a completely different way reframed, without using the old poem for reference/structure.
Unless you can somehow weave an old stanza with new stanza in some discernible theme for reader.
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#162831 - 10/16/08 04:20 AM
Re: Authenticity of Voice
[Re: orchid]
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Interesting. I will think for a while but my instant thought is not to edit. May be good to further develop certain pieces that touch you greatly.
Re reading my earlier academic essays hit me in their formation.Some passion. And that mirrored my enthusisium. By the time I was doing post grad work I became good at giving what was expected.Both concepts are valid.
However my poetry as I believe are part of my identity (Are my unshed fears and tears... my joys) so some earlier works are profound...show stages and growth.
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#162888 - 10/16/08 12:57 PM
Re: Authenticity of Voice
[Re: Dotsie]
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Registered: 01/16/07
Posts: 3404
Loc: USA
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OH Meredith, I wouldn't edit. Instead, maybe add postcripts, addendums, updates... which would make the work more interesting still... then five to ten years from now, do the same again. How lucky you are to have your work to revisit, thoughts to re-ponder... I'm envious!!!
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#162889 - 10/16/08 01:05 PM
Re: Authenticity of Voice
[Re: gims]
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Registered: 09/26/04
Posts: 3910
Loc: Alabama
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Meredith, you could edit but also keep the original and date both as Dotsie suggested.
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#162949 - 10/16/08 08:02 PM
Re: Authenticity of Voice
[Re: savvygrandmother]
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The Divine Ms M
Registered: 07/07/03
Posts: 4894
Loc: Orange County, California
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Gals, thanks for your input. All my work is dated. On the earlier poems, it's more like -- "I could write this better," not "I could write this different." better grammar, removing extra verbiage, cutting out the cliches.
So far, I haven't edited anything, but was thinking about it.
On a parallel note, I also have some large paintings I did in my 20's. Three of which I love, and the rest of which -- I never loved, and am getting bored with. (Then, they're on my walls and I see them every day.) And I'm thinking about "doing something" to the ones I'm tired of, but maybe I should preserve those too? I don't know.
Part of me very much likes the idea of an historical record of my creative life, and part of me wants to fix things. *sigh*
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#162950 - 10/16/08 08:18 PM
Re: Authenticity of Voice
[Re: meredithbead]
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Registered: 11/11/04
Posts: 3503
Loc: Colorado
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Meredith, I'm with the others who say don't edit. Those works are a snap-shot in time. When I have paintings I don't love, I tear them up and use the pieces for collage. So I've retained the work, only re-mixed. Kind of like the music of the time, same music, remixed all shiny again. Don't fix things, there is probably nothing to fix. You have evolved, so you have what was, and what is.
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#162959 - 10/16/08 11:59 PM
Re: Authenticity of Voice
[Re: Princess Lenora]
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Registered: 01/21/07
Posts: 3675
Loc: British Columbia, Canada
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Sounds abit messy to take an existing painting that you finished ages ago and paint it differently. Well, you know the old technique of black-gessoing the whole painting over...and then have a black tabula rasa for next painting. 
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