Baby Bonita Rose:
You brought the message over very cleverly. First the happiness and the loving siblings; then the loneliness and lost feeling.

I am not really a fan of modern abstract poetry. I like the old fashioned rhyming with rhythm. So what bothered me a little was the irregular beat.

I count the syllables, and the other lines or every second line should have the same count. You got that pretty down pat in your poem Farm Growing Gal. I really like that one. What are bantams?

And I hear you in A Longing Soul. The last sentence was a little too long for my taste…Maybe instead of love-centered use just a one syllable word.

I love to write poems too jabber. It’s fun and soothing. Got any more?
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