I'm getting brave, now.

Here's the one I really want critiqued. Hope you don't mind!


BABY BONITA ROSE

Bonita Rose with fingers grabs toes,
While lying in her crib,
Giggles and noise of girls and boys,
make happy, Bonita Rose.
Brothers and sisters in fun do take part,
which greatly gladdens the wee baby's heart.
Once siblings stayed and everyone played,
with baby Bonita Rose.
But from the kitchen came a different sound,
Momma and lover by dad had been found.
Unannounced and home from the war,
Two new babies not there before,
And one was Bonita Rose.
Baby knew not what had gone wrong,
Next time she awoke all were gone,
from baby Bonita Rose.
This story is true,
it is not a joke,
Silence surrounds,
Baby's spirit is broke!