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#216599 - 03/05/12 08:42 PM Steinbeck Said "A book is like a man" - and you?
Anne Holmes Administrator Offline
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Registered: 03/12/10
Posts: 3212
Loc: Illinois
I just came across this website, "Letters of Note," offering a copy of a letter John Steinbeck wrote to his editor, as he finished writing his epic novel, "East of Eden."

For all the authors and author wannabes in this group, I thought it was worth sharing... And I'd love to hear your thoughts.

New York

Dear Pat:

I have decided for this, my book, East of Eden, to write dedication, prologue, argument, apology, epilogue and perhaps epitaph all in one.

The dedication is to you with all the admiration and affection that have been distilled from our singularly blessed association of many years. This book is inscribed to you because you have been part of its birth and growth.

As you know, a prologue is written last but placed first to explain the book's shortcomings and to ask the reader to be kind. But a prologue is also a note of farewell from the writer to his book. For years the writer and his book have been together—friends or bitter enemies but very close as only love and fighting can accomplish.

Then suddenly the book is done. It is a kind of death. This is the requiem.

Miguel Cervantes invented the modem novel and with his Don Quixote set a mark high and bright. In his prologue, he said best what writers feel—the gladness and the terror.

"Idling reader," Cervantes wrote, "you may believe me when I tell you that I should have liked this book, which is the child of my brain, to be the fairest, the sprightliest and the cleverest that could be imagined, but I have not been able to contravene the law of nature which would have it that like begets like—"

And so it is with me, Pat. Although some times I have felt that I held fire in my hands and spread a page with shining—I have never lost the weight of clumsiness, of ignorance, of aching inability.

A book is like a man—clever and dull, brave and cowardly, beautiful and ugly. For every flowering thought there will be a page like a wet and mangy mongrel, and for every looping flight a tap on the wing and a reminder that wax cannot hold the feathers firm too near the sun.

Well—then the book is done. It has no virtue any more. The writer wants to cry out—"Bring it back! Let me rewrite it or better—Let me burn it. Don't let it out in the unfriendly cold in that condition."

As you know better than most, Pat, the book does not go from writer to reader. It goes first to the lions—editors, publishers, critics, copy readers, sales department. It is kicked and slashed and gouged. And its bloodied father stands attorney.

The book is out of balance. The reader expects one thing and you give him something else. You have written two books and stuck them together. The reader will not understand.

No, sir. It goes together. I have written about one family and used stories about another family as—well, as counterpoint, as rest, as contrast in pace and color.

The reader won't understand. What you call counterpoint only slows the book.

It has to be slowed—else how would you know when it goes fast?

You have stopped the book and gone into discussions of God knows what.

Yes, I have. I don't know why. Just wanted to. Perhaps I was wrong.

The book's too long. Costs are up. We'll have to charge five dollars for it. People won't pay $5. They won't buy it.

My last book was short. You said then that people won't buy a short book.

The chronology is full of holes. The grammar has no relation to English. On page so-and-so you have a man look in the World Almanac for steamship rates. They aren't there. I checked. You've got Chinese New Year wrong. The characters aren't consistent. You describe Liza Hamilton one way and then have her act a different way.

You make Cathy too black. The reader won't believe her. You make Sam Hamilton too white. The reader won't believe him. No Irishman ever talked like that.

My grandfather did.

Who'll believe it?

No children ever talked like that.

(Losing temper as a refuge from despair)
God damn it. This is my book. I'll make the children talk any way I want. My book is about good and evil. Maybe the theme got into the execution. Do you want to publish it or not?

Let's see if we can't fix it up. It won't be much work. You want it to be good, don't you? For instance the ending. The reader won't understand it.

Do you?

Yes, but the reader won't.

My god, how you do dangle a participle. Turn to page so-and-so.

There you are, Pat. You came in with a box of glory and there you stand with an armful of damp garbage. And from this meeting a new character has emerged. He is called the Reader.

He is so stupid you can't trust him with an idea.
He is so clever he will catch you in the least error.
He will not buy short books.
He will not buy long books.
He is part moron, part genius and part ogre.
There is some doubt as to whether he can read.

Well, by God, Pat, he's just like me, no stranger at all. He'll take from my book what he can bring to it. The dull witted will get dullness and the brilliant may find things in my book I didn't know were there.

And just as he is like me, I hope my book is enough like him so that he may find in it interest and recognition and some beauty as one finds in a friend.

Cervantes ends his prologue with a lovely line. I want to use it, Pat, and then I will be done. He says to the reader:

"May God give you health—and may He be not unmindful of me, as well."

John Steinbeck
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#216600 - 03/05/12 10:43 PM Re: Steinbeck Said "A book is like a man" - and you? [Re: Anne Holmes]
yonuh Offline

Registered: 06/14/06
Posts: 2447
Loc: Arizona
What a great letter! I haven't had the experience with proofreaders, or editors, or sales. But I imagine my responses would be close to what Steinbeck's are; my books are my babies in a sense, and I'm never ready for them to go out into the world. I felt the same way about papers I had to write in college - they never met my expectations and always needed more editing. There comes a point where writers have to declare the product finished and let it go, otherwise it would never be finished!
Well-behaved women rarely make history. - Laurel Thatcher Ulrich

#216756 - 03/27/12 02:22 PM Re: Steinbeck Said "A book is like a man" - and you? [Re: yonuh]
jabber Offline

Registered: 02/17/05
Posts: 10032
Loc: New York State
Enjoyed reading Steinbeck's remarks and can relate. Authors pour their deepest emotions into the written word, hoping it's clear enough for readers to grasp. Perhaps if creative motivation is to help others avoid devastating pitfalls, they'll achieve that goal.

#217424 - 06/24/12 08:24 PM Re: Steinbeck Said "A book is like a man" - and you? [Re: jabber]
judym Offline

Registered: 09/14/05
Posts: 156
Loc: AL
Wow, what a great post. East of Eden is one of Steinbeck's best, next to Grapes of Wrath- they both capture the essence of the human frailty and the raw nature of it, the ebb and flow and clashing of human nature, yet they both paint the characters so well, they are vivid in your mind as you read. What he went thru to hold his stead on his characters in this book! I much prefer my dogeared and book sale garnered old friends, not an e-reader for me. I have to heft and hold my old friends in my hands, and squint with the readers and find good light- and when I re-read those old friends, it's like slipping into a very comfortable pair of shoes, an AHHH moment.

#217426 - 06/24/12 11:21 PM Re: Steinbeck Said "A book is like a man" - and you? [Re: judym]
Anne Holmes Administrator Offline
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Registered: 03/12/10
Posts: 3212
Loc: Illinois
Well said JudyM! Good to see you here again!
Boomer in Chief of Boomer Women Speak and the National Association of Baby Boomer Women.

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