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#164523 - 11/04/08 09:37 AM
Re: What say you...?
[Re: gims]
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Registered: 02/17/05
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gims, You write the neatest poems, especially when you say they're hard words. You must like a challenge!
I feel so alone, though I try real hard, to fight the good fight, both day and night!
I work long hours, here at home, I seldom waste time, and do rarely roam.
When life is o'er, and those left behind, Examine my life, I hope they find, I won some, I lost some, but tried my best, And those that knew me, fore they put me to rest, Could plainly see, I loved them all, no matter their spirit, big or small!
New words: Vote, weather, shiney, gloom
Edited by jabber (11/05/08 01:09 PM)
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#164540 - 11/04/08 12:37 PM
Re: What say you...?
[Re: jabber]
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Registered: 09/09/08
Posts: 779
Loc: American living in Germany
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Oh man...you are all so good. Jabber, that was your best poem yet! Me? I got writer's block.
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A friend is a gift you give yourself. -- Robert Louis Stevenson
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#164559 - 11/04/08 03:34 PM
Re: What say you...?
[Re: Edelweiss2]
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Registered: 09/26/04
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I agree, Jabber I really like that one. I enjoy each and every one written here. I don't have time to write right now but I will be back soon.
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#164573 - 11/04/08 04:35 PM
Re: What say you...?
[Re: chickadee]
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GLOOM and doom is all I see, The WEATHER is lousy all around me.
If only I hadn't sold my boat, I'd sail to the mainland so I could VOTE.
My dress is pressed, my shoes are SHINY, Who will I pick to take me to town, I know, I play eenie, meenie, minee...
WORDS: perfect, music, hayride, justice
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#164595 - 11/04/08 06:24 PM
Re: What say you...?
[Re: chatty lady]
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Registered: 01/16/07
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chatty, I was wondering how someone was going to get those four to work... you did it! ...and I'll be challenged if you didn't pick four more hard ones!
jabber, I agree, that's your best yet...
is that what it is when nothing pops into our heads, EW, writer's block... hilarious graphic illustrating it!
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#164628 - 11/04/08 11:45 PM
Re: What say you...?
[Re: gims]
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Registered: 01/16/07
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Loc: USA
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Remember the hayride of '58 The both of us staying out way too late A perfect moon shining oh so clear You whispering affections in my ear We heard music that no one was playing It drowned out all that others were saying Love's justice was given to us that night Tho fifty years gone, you're still my delight.
pillow, shoe, cotton, place
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#164644 - 11/05/08 02:11 AM
Re: What say you...?
[Re: gims]
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Registered: 09/09/08
Posts: 779
Loc: American living in Germany
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pillow, shoe, cotton, place ... Now these were fun easy words. Thanks Gims. Your poem reminded me of Elizabeth Browning.
Have you ever lost something like glasses or a ring? Gone crazy looking for the darn lost thing? You look under shoes, pillows and rugs Cotton sock drawers and porcelain jugs.
You look and you pray, help me find my darn thing Where oh where can it be, I’ve looked under everything! AAAH, then you look in the mirror at your own sad face And see that the glasses you lost, are sitting in the right place.
New words: strong, beginning, country, USA
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#164730 - 11/05/08 01:29 PM
Re: What say you...?
[Re: jawjaw]
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Registered: 02/17/05
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Loved your poem, jawjaw!!!
Our ole oak trees and acorn fruit, Will soon be covered with snow, We'll see kids on sleds and kids in boots, Fore winter is comin', you know!
Cows and horses and mules they'll move, Inside the barn and out of the cold. Our pettin' zoo for sure will close, And the monkey and goats and all of those, Must live indoors so they're not exposed. It's freezin' weather, up here in the north, During those first and last months of the year, And much loved critters, ought be protected, By those that love them so dear! Tiny tots with new toys in mind, Jump for joy and are unable to unwind. They need not be told, "say cheese little one," Fore their grins already have begun. Listen up, my friend, and you will hear, Christmas is coming, Christmas is near, It's 'round the bend, it's that time of year!
New words: Fluffy, pine, field, wine
Edited by jabber (11/06/08 10:32 AM)
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#164733 - 11/05/08 02:16 PM
Re: What say you...?
[Re: jawjaw]
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Registered: 01/16/07
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... and EW, your poem was written about me. So often, I go looking for my glasses and they are on my head, as the common joke goes... also, sometimes, I'll reach up to adjust them at the bridge AND I don't even have them on. Think it's time for lasik?
Love it, JJ... how apropos!
acorn, snow, monkey, cheese
I went to the local zoo Just the other day Found a strange monkey Playing with some clay
But, after getting closer And getting on my knees I put my face up to the glass Then thought it might be cheese
When the monkey saw my face He dropped the odd Play-Doh Then a thought came to me The stuff must be old snow
It didn't melt upon the ground I watched it for awhile Besides it was a puky brown Which made me think of bile
Yes, I came to know by then The stuff, a ball of goo, Was stepped upon by the monk To expose the final clue
Within the flattened gooey mess An acorn sat so proud The monkey simply wanted To get the acorn out
Chance had made a crooked deal The seed had landed so To be in Monkey's dinner meal Then in his weird Play-Doh
(this comes from me actually seeing an ape playing with a mess he made)
new words: blaze, heart, soft, fell
ooops... I was working on mine when jabber posted, so we'll go back to her words: fluffy, pine, field, wine
Edited by gims (11/05/08 02:22 PM)
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