Lola, great idea, but should she leave that thought in the letter somewhere? I think it's a good one, but possibly not the best ending.

It's good to end with something upbeat like:

It's with much excitement that I await your response because I believe you are capable of allowing me a new lease on life, (or whatever you see as the greatest benefit of getting another opinion). Make them think they could do soemthing totally awesome for another person. Maybe that will tug on their heartstrings.
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